Ok u requested it, but part of me can't fully crit this piece b/c u mention it being lazy pencils and color. With that said, the graphic design HAHA you added seem like a last minute effort. I liked the visual fx you tried to incorporate into the words but those words don't suit the image properly. Last time I checked flesh colored zippers weren't a fashion trend, nor should they be. Also, for a piece that commands attention, according to the subject matter you choose to illustrate, you went with really bland and boring colors. In fact it's very refreshing to see the blue eye color b/c that color is the only color to show some life.
The zipper shows up flesh but on a zoomed in look it does appear sorta white. But that illustrates how there should be a better contrast between the flesh and zipper. As for the muted colors, if that's the way you wanted it that's cool. It just gives a more deathly vibe than vibe from the original sketch.
But don't worry I won't be like Tate and say you're being defensive just cause you felt the need to explain your art direction.
Well done! U have earned a zero bar! I give u permission to indulge. Nice to see yah dabble outta character n have fun. Kudos bro! Felt great didnt it?! Well it should have, no crits here. Lazy coloring?! I think not. Guess everyone forgot about brians last post, haha!
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Ok u requested it, but part of me can't fully crit this piece b/c u mention it being lazy pencils and color. With that said, the graphic design HAHA you added seem like a last minute effort. I liked the visual fx you tried to incorporate into the words but those words don't suit the image properly. Last time I checked flesh colored zippers weren't a fashion trend, nor should they be. Also, for a piece that commands attention, according to the subject matter you choose to illustrate, you went with really bland and boring colors. In fact it's very refreshing to see the blue eye color b/c that color is the only color to show some life.
HaHa little did you know the zipper is white not skin colored...and i chose muted colors to bring the out eye....buuuutttt thanks for the Jae ;)
i left out the word crit my bad
It's shake and bake and I helped!
^_^
The zipper shows up flesh but on a zoomed in look it does appear sorta white. But that illustrates how there should be a better contrast between the flesh and zipper. As for the muted colors, if that's the way you wanted it that's cool. It just gives a more deathly vibe than vibe from the original sketch.
But don't worry I won't be like Tate and say you're being defensive just cause you felt the need to explain your art direction.
all the emotionals, any way nice stuff Henry
Nice piece henry, i still like it even tho u say it was lazy drawing and coloring. THe crazy ckick is still hot.
Well done! U have earned a zero bar! I give u permission to indulge. Nice to see yah dabble outta character n have fun. Kudos bro! Felt great didnt it?! Well it should have, no crits here. Lazy coloring?! I think not. Guess everyone forgot about brians last post, haha!
-BERTIUS
Thanks for comments guys I'm glad you liked and lol at your comment burt
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