Ok Henry. I want to see you strut your illustration skills better. I want to start seeing something more than you just drawing characters and slapping some graphic in the background. I want to to you composite a scene with your luscious character work. In terms of critique of this illustration, overall it is good. The PS inking you did is crude and takes away from the drawing though. The composition could have been ameliorated to better showcase Nu, as I find her design to be more interesting out of the two. I understand what you were going for with the skull bg; however, it comes off as more pirate-esque. Loved your inventiveness with the panda staff and strong pose with Star.
lol yeah I haven't been taking the time to do backgrounds at all in my illustrations so I totally agree i gotta get out of my lazy rut... but i think the inking is actually smooth and precise as opposed to crude.
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Ok Henry. I want to see you strut your illustration skills better. I want to start seeing something more than you just drawing characters and slapping some graphic in the background. I want to to you composite a scene with your luscious character work. In terms of critique of this illustration, overall it is good. The PS inking you did is crude and takes away from the drawing though. The composition could have been ameliorated to better showcase Nu, as I find her design to be more interesting out of the two. I understand what you were going for with the skull bg; however, it comes off as more pirate-esque. Loved your inventiveness with the panda staff and strong pose with Star.
lol yeah I haven't been taking the time to do backgrounds at all in my illustrations so I totally agree i gotta get out of my lazy rut... but i think the inking is actually smooth and precise as opposed to crude.
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