Haven't posted much, but I thought I'd post this up. Most of you probably know about my mage pseudo fantasy story. Here's a little warm-up of the teacher and student. Looking at the finished piece, I should have adjusted the teacher's pose to have a more falling gesture to it.J.S.
2 comments:
Your official 3rd post yayyyyy...where do we begin...lets see I like the background and the idea behind the composition but there are a few things that miss the mark the left arm on the teacher is funky as well as Han's Hands...I also agree with u that a better falling pose was needed for the teacher...the last thing that threw the piece off for me was that the teacher and student don't seem to be on the same plane...I think if you moved the teacher back and shrunk her or made han bigger and moved him forward it would work better visually....
Yeah you're 100% right on this.
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